Morning Reveals
Dew-beads & bird chirps, the exquisite array of trembling leaf and trellised grove, green upon green, crimson-tipped the new September sumac, the grape vines tangling lusciously tangerine-dappled...
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Jaz, I was going to highlight the first two lines, and then the first stanza, and then the crisp angelic apple tart (oh sweet!!) and then "the morning is singing, can you hear the message all...
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This is lovely, a perfectly worded sweet celebration of the season.
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thank you SArah and Bongler for sharing in the delights of pre-autumnal SPLENDOR !!! Jaz
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Jaz, I love that sense you capture with "Autumn is falling, almost falling" . . . suggestive of the flux, contradictions of the living moment. Probably not what you intended, but . . . you take your...
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Thanks mss and sugarmuser for the great replies! I LOVE the feel of autumn in the air. Yes, the flux of the living moment, good one. Jaz
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You have a great gift for beautiful description Jaz - you make me almost glad that it's this colourful season again despite the fact that here we have had practically no summer:)
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A delicious poem with that trembling leaf and trellised grove, green upon green. Wonderful sounds in those lines and the sumac lines. And that ending, yes! Enjoyed your poem much, Jazzy girl. kerri
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You paint lovely images with your words Jaz... thanks for sharing the splendor of an autumn morn. Regards, Maryse
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Autumn is falling, almost falling, crisp as an angelic apple tart, refreshing the morning is singing, can you hear the message all beautiful, reminding us to go deeper into the center of this day....
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Hi Jasmine, This is exquisite and with Autumn rising in the air and throughout the landscape, one is inspired to "go deeper into the center of that day". I can feel and smell these marvelous details...
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Dew-beads & bird chirps, the exquisite array of trembling leaf and trellised grove, green upon green, crimson-tipped the new September sumac, the grape vines tangling lusciously tangerine-dappled...
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Jaz, I was going to highlight the first two lines, and then the first stanza, and then the crisp angelic apple tart (oh sweet!!) and then "the morning is singing, can you hear the message all...
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This is lovely, a perfectly worded sweet celebration of the season.
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thank you SArah and Bongler for sharing in the delights of pre-autumnal SPLENDOR !!! Jaz
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